나의 작문
I borrowed two movie discs from the library last Sunday. Yesterday, I had vocal lesson, so I can’t take the time to watch movies. Today, I will be going to see one or two movies.
Today, I have to buy water. I only have one bottle of water. Maybe next Monday, I will no longer drink water at home. So, I have to buy it from 쿠팡 or store. Last night, I login to 쿠팡, but I couldn’t order anything. I’m not a member of 쿠팡, so I have to order more then 20,000 won, but items in my wish list are just 16,000 won.
교정 작문
I borrowed two movie discs from the library last Sunday. Yesterday, I had a vocal lesson, so I couldn't find the time to watch the films. Today, I plan to watch one or both of them.
Today, I need to buy water. I currently have only one bottle left. By next Monday, I may run out of drinking water at home, so I need to purchase some from 쿠팡 or a local store. Last night, I logged into 쿠팡, but I couldn’t place an order. Since I am not a member of 쿠팡, I must order more than 20,000 won, but the items in my wish list total only 16,000 won.
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